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Toshihiro Nonaka ( tnonaka AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Yu Zhang ( yuz AT ccnu.edu.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Baryon-Strangeness-Correlations-3-GeV-AuAu-Collisions-RHIC-STAR-Fixe

Comment:
Dear Yu,

Thanks for your nice abstract. Please find my comments below.

General:
I think the motivation of your study is to confirm the turn-off of the QGP at 
 
3 GeV, as the baryon-strangeness correlation is expected to be larger than  
unity for the hadronic gap at high muB region. Thus, as also commented by  
Hanna, I would suggest to extend the sentence around L11 to mention not only  
about QGP but also about hadronic gas.

L8: promising -> powerful (or sensitive)

L18: from the fixed-target program at the STAR experiment

Best regards,
Toshihiro

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