STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["Yu Zhang" <yuz AT ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear Toshihiro,

Thank you very much for your comments.

I've added more about the motivation.

Please find updated abstract in the same link.

Best regards,

Yu  

 

 

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Date:  Fri, Apr 21, 2023 02:15 PM

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Subject:  [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Yu Zhang for Quark Matter 2023 got commented by Toshihiro Nonaka

 

Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Toshihiro Nonaka ( tnonaka AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) has commented on a material 
originally submitted by Yu Zhang ( yuz AT ccnu.edu.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Baryon-Strangeness-Correlations-3-GeV-AuAu-Collisions-RHIC-STAR-Fixe

Comment:
Dear Yu,

Thanks for your nice abstract. Please find my comments below.

General:
I think the motivation of your study is to confirm the turn-off of the QGP at 
3 GeV, as the baryon-strangeness correlation is expected to be larger than 
unity for the hadronic gap at high muB region. Thus, as also commented by 
Hanna, I would suggest to extend the sentence around L11 to mention not only 
about QGP but also about hadronic gas.

L8: promising -> powerful (or sensitive)

L18: from the fixed-target program at the STAR experiment

Best regards,
Toshihiro

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