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["曾钰" <zengy AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear Hanna and Toshihiro,

Thanks very much for you comments. I have implemented them and reupload my poster.

Please have a look: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Yu_Zeng_QM2023_poster_v2_.pdf

Cheers,

Yu Zeng

 

 

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Date:  Sat, Aug 26, 2023 09:44 PM

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Subject:  Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Yu Zeng for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

Dear Yu,

I have a few minor suggestions on your nice poster presentation.

- Section title “Correlation Function” -> “Correlation function”, “Results and Summary” -> “Results and summary”

- Make axis labels/titles and legends bigger.

- (Summary) The centrality and rapidity dependence…

With these implemented, I sign off.

Best regards,

Toshihiro

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件名: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Yu Zeng for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

Dear Yu,

Please find below my comments on your nice poster.

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Abstract: I suggest not mentioning QGP as at 3.2 GeV, we don’t expect it.

Will be shown -> are shown

Femtoscopy section: Two-particle -> two-particle

function(referred -> function (referred

spacetime -> space-time

and Twiss interferometry -> and Twiss interferometry [1] (add a reference)

I suggest here to mention not only the fact that in astronomy, the properties of stars are determined but also that we deal with different orders of size magnitudes (HIC: fm, astronomy: tens of m), and that in astronomy, the signal intensities are measured, while in HIC the momenta of emitted particles (to extend little bit what is seen on the figure).

Please add the reference to the figure.

Correlation Function:

Define N, P(p-1, p_2), P(p_1), P(p_2), S(r)

Track-splitting effect:

two(Track1 and Track2) -> two (track 1, track 2)

Track-merge effect:

tracks(Track1 and Track2) -> tracks (track 1 and track 2)

Results and Summary,

Please increase the font sizes at your figures (axis, scales)

Source size is extracted -> Extract the source size

You can mention f_0 and d_0 parameters when you write the effective range and the scattering length.

You can add [3] reference here.

Add a place where you mention [2] reference.

With those implemented, I sign off.

Enjoy the conference,

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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Yu Zeng ( zengy AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a review,  
please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64886

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