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Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zaochen Ye ( zaochen.ye.2017 AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Zachary Sweger ( zwsweger AT ucdavis.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/DNPJPS-2023/Status-Report-Analyses-Proton-Number-Cumulants-STAR-Fixed-Target-Program

Comment:
Dear Zachary,

Thanks for preparing this very nice talk, I have a few comments for your  
consideration. Please kindly find them as follows:

slide 5:
- mention the FXT mode in the last bullet.

slide 7:
- "At 7.7 GeV midrapidity" ==> "At 7.7 GeV, the midrapidity"
- " PID to rely more on TOF than TPC identification" ==> " particle  
identification (PID) to rely more on TOF than TPC"

slide 20:
- "Midrapidity analyses" ==> "Midrapidity measurements"
- "Analyses as a function of rapidity " ==> "Rapidity dependent study"


Best,
Zaochen


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