STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Zachary Sweger <zwsweger AT ucdavis.edu>]

Dear Zaochen,

Thank you for the comments, I've addressed them and reuploaded the presentation: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Sweger_DNP2023_v2.pdf

I also added a few details on pileup on slide 17. 

Best,

Zach

On Tue, Nov 14, 2023 at 4:48 PM webmaster--- via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zaochen Ye ( zaochen.ye.2017 AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material 
originally submitted by Zachary Sweger ( zwsweger AT ucdavis.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/DNPJPS-2023/Status-Report-Analyses-Proton-Number-Cumulants-STAR-Fixed-Target-Program

Comment:
Dear Zachary,

Thanks for preparing this very nice talk, I have a few comments for your 
consideration. Please kindly find them as follows:

slide 5:
- mention the FXT mode in the last bullet.

slide 7:
- "At 7.7 GeV midrapidity" ==> "At 7.7 GeV, the midrapidity"
- " PID to rely more on TOF than TPC identification" ==> " particle 
identification (PID) to rely more on TOF than TPC"

slide 20:
- "Midrapidity analyses" ==> "Midrapidity measurements"
- "Analyses as a function of rapidity " ==> "Rapidity dependent study"


Best,
Zaochen


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