STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Anna Kraeva <annakraeva555 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Hanna and Nu,

Thank you for your comments. Please find my answers below:

> 1) left panel - STAR FXT setup figure: (i) in the second bullet, the number ‘200.7 cm’ is inconsistent with the number ‘2.01m’. I suggest use the same number;
> (ii) The 3rd bullet should be part of the 2nd bullet;
> (iii) add an additional bullet: “The FXT setup provides a full rapidity coverage for identified charged pions from the 3.0 GeV Au+Au collisions, .”

Done. 

> 2) right panel - the equation: the terms N, lambda and K(q) are not defined. I suggest define these terms and remove the last sentence starting ’The other cross term …’.

Done.

> 3) Results figure: add vertical dashed lines at qs = 0 and horizontal dashed lines are C(q) = 1;

Done. 

> 4) Last figure:   add vertical dashed lines at y_cm - y_pair = 0 and horizontal lines are R^2_out-long = 0.

Done. 

> One minor comment, please specify which symmetry you mean in out-side and side-long component.

I have removed this sentence as Nu suggests. 

Please have a look: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66360

Thank you,
Anna

сб, 13 янв. 2024 г. в 08:26, Nu Xu <nxu AT lbl.gov>:

Hi Anna and All,

Here are my comments/suggestions about this poster:
1) left panel - STAR FXT setup figure: (i) in the second bullet, the number ‘200.7 cm’ is inconsistent with the number ‘2.01m’. I suggest use the same number;
(ii) The 3rd bullet should be part of the 2nd bullet;
(iii) add an additional bullet: “The FXT setup provides a full rapidity coverage for identified charged pions from the 3.0 GeV Au+Au collisions, .”

2) right panel - the equation: the terms N, lambda and K(q) are not defined. I suggest define these terms and remove the last sentence starting ’The other cross term …’.

3) Results figure: add vertical dashed lines at qs = 0 and horizontal dashed lines are C(q) = 1;

4) Last figure:   add vertical dashed lines at y_cm - y_pair = 0 and horizontal lines are R^2_out-long = 0.

With these changes, I sign off.

Best regards,
Nu


> On Jan 11, 2024, at 1:51 PM, Anna Kraeva via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
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> Dear Hanna,
>
> Thank you for your comments. I have added a figure with correlation functions and more detailed information about mixed components. Please have a look: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66360
>
> Thank you,
> Anna
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> чт, 11 янв. 2024 г. в 16:11, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:
> Dear Anna,
>
> Your poster looks good to me.
>
> I have 2 comments:
> 1. It would be good to show the example of the correlation function with the fit (projections).
> 2. As single, out, side, and long components can be easily interpreted, I suggest discussing mixed components (why they are introduced, why only out-long, not all are considered). Simple cartoons and / or more detailed information, except for single statements in the Summary part, would help.
>
> With these implemented, I sign off.
>
> Thanks,
> Hanna
>
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