STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Nu Xu <nxu AT lbl.gov>]

Dear Bijun and All,

Here are my suggestions:
1) line 12: add “,” after ‘…. experiment’;

2) line 15: I suggest stop the first part of the sentence at “… are 
extracted.” Start a new sentence like: “These new results will be compared 
with that from pion femtoscopic measurements and will be discussed with the 
calculations of hadronic transport model.”;

3) Since we do not have any new info on the FSI parameters from the Kaon 
measurements, I would suggest to remove the sentence in line 4 starts with 
'Precise information …”.

With these implemented, I sign off.

Best regards,

Nu

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