STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["樊碧君" <bjfan AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear Hanna,

Thank you for your suggestions. I have implemented them and the new version can be found in the link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/SQM_Astract_Kaon_HBT_v3.pdf

Thanks and best,

Bijun

 

 

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From:  "Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Mon, Feb 5, 2024 09:48 PM

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Cc:  "Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk"<hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>;

Subject:  Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Bijun Fan for SQM-2024 submitted for review

 

Dear Bijun,

I have following comments regarding your nice abstract:

Line 3: these correlations -> them

Line 7: Kaon -> kaon

Line 12: that -> those

With this implemented, I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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Dear Nu and all,

Thank you for your suggestions. I have implemented them and the new version can be found in the link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/SQM-2024/Measurements-Kaon-Femtoscopy-AuAu-Collisions-sqrtsNN-30-45-GeV-0

Thanks and best,

Bijun

 

 

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From:  "Nu Xu via Star-cf-l"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Mon, Feb 5, 2024 02:27 AM

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Subject:  Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Bijun Fan for SQM-2024 submitted for review

 

Dear Bijun and All,

Here are my suggestions:
1) line 12: add “,” after ‘…. experiment’;

2) line 15: I suggest stop the first part of the sentence at “… are extracted.” Start a new sentence like: “These new results will be compared with that from pion femtoscopic measurements and will be discussed with the calculations of hadronic transport model.”;

3) Since we do not have any new info on the FSI parameters from the Kaon measurements, I would suggest to remove the sentence in line 4 starts with 'Precise information …”.

With these implemented, I sign off.

Best regards,

Nu

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