STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Hanwen,

Thank you for implementing suggestions and providing explanation. 

Therefore I sign of your nice presentation.

Enjoy the conference,

Kind regards,

Hanna

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Wiadomość napisana przez Hanwen Feng <hwfeng AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn> w dniu 09.05.2024, o godz. 04:59:

Dear Hanna,

Thanks for your prompt reply and helpful suggestions, I have replaced the older version with the revised one on drupal.

Suggestions on Slide 4, 6, 8 are implemented. 

Slide 13 shows the TPC tracking efficiency and Hyperon reconstruction efficiency from embedding as well as TOF efficiency from data. I think those are not results.

Slide 14 shows the calculations from UrQMD, not data. I have increased the label "UrQMD" in the plot and I will emphasize it in the presentation.

Best regards,

Hanwen Feng

From: Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l

Date: 2024-05-09 03:51

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CC: Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

Subject: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Hanwen Feng for CPOD 2024 submitted for review

Dear Hanwen,

Thank for submitting your presentation on time.

Find below comments to your presentation:

Slide 4:

I suggest increasing fonts describing quark’s flavors (u, d, s) and „Deconfinement"

Slide 6:

from 7.7 -> from \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 7.7

Slide 8:

Increase please fonts describing symbols describing particles and „Primary Vertex”

Slides 13, 14:

Are these data? If so, you should have placed „STAR Preliminary” that should have been granted before.

If it’s not the case, you should not show results with data including some corrections.

Kind regards,

Hanna

prof. dr hab. inż. Hanna Zbroszczyk
E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl
Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (biuro)

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Poltechnika Warszawska

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Wiadomość napisana przez webmaster--- via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 08.05.2024, o godz. 14:27:

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Hanwen Feng (hwfeng AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a review,  
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