STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Boyang,

You have submitted many entries, here I comment on the following file: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/SQM-2024/Measurement-Proton-Xi-Correlation-Functions-Isobar-and-AuAu-Collisions-sqrt-2

Thanks for submitting your proceedings on time.

Please find my comments below:

The title: Proton - /Xi^- -> p-\Xi^- (decide whether you use symbols all names of particles)

L10: proton - /Xi^- -> p-\Xi^- (the same comment)

L17: the equation of state -> EoS (as already define above)

L18: remove: some of these 

Interactions[1] -> interactions [1]

L19: hyperon-hyperon (Y-Y) -> Y-Y (as already defined)

L20: puzzle[2] -> puzzle [2]

L22: particle[3] -> particle [3]

L23:  high-energy nuclear collisions -> heavy-ion collisions (as we study femtoscopy also in much lower collision energies)

L30-3: add that k* and r* are defined in the Pair rest Frame (PRF) reference. 

L32: distribution of the emitting source -> source function

L36: model[4] -> model [4]

L37: add a reference to the smoothness approximation

Figure 1, description: 10%(left) -> 10% (left), 40%(middle) -> 40% (middle), 80%(right) -> 80% (right),

simulation[5][6] -> simulation [5-6]

L45: remove: in the pair rest frame

L46: remove: (Ru+Ru, Zr+Zr)

L47: remove track merging and track splitting listed as corrections as you do not correct your correction function on these effects but you apply cuts reducing these detector effects, so they are not correlations

What do you mean by: residual effects (except feed-down that you mention as well)

What do you mean by background effects (extend the description of the last 2 in your text)

L49: bins -> classes

CFs -> correlation functions

L50: bins ->classes

L51: method[7] -> method [7]

L52: Coulomb interaction alone -> only Coulomb interaction

L52/53: remove” from all centralities.

L53: add a reference to HALQCD

L55: proton and \Xî -> single particles 

L56: QCD[5][6] -> QCD [5-6]

L57: bins -> classes

L59/60: remove: (Ru+Ru, Zr+Zr)

L61: remove: to be

L62: remove: value

L63: remove: rather

L67: bins -> classes

L70: define dN_{ch}/d_{eta}

Figurę 3, description: remove: (Ru+Ru, Zr+Zr)

L74: remove: (Ru+Ru, Zr+Zr) 

L77: source size (R_G) -> source size OR -> R_G (as defined before)

L79/80: remove: (Ru+Ru, Zr+Zr)

I hope it helps,

Thanks,

Hanna

Prof. Hanna Zbroszczyk, PhD, DSc, Eng.

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Wiadomość napisana przez 付博洋 (via star-cf-l Mailing List) <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 09.09.2024, o godz. 08:53:

Deae All,

This is a kindly reminder that I have submitted my proceeding for SQM2024.

Please kindly have a look!

Any comments or suggestions are highly welcome!

Best regards,

Boyang

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