STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["付博洋" <boyangfu AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear Hanna,

Thanks for nice comments! I'm implemented them in the updated version.

Please find the new version in the following link and reply in the below:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/SQM-2024/Measurement-Proton-Xi-Correlation-Functions-Isobar-and-AuAu-Collisions-sqrt-2

Any other comments or suggestions are kindly welcome!

Best regards,

Boyang

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From:  "STAR Correlations and Fluctuatio"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Mon, Sep 9, 2024 11:52 PM

To:  "STAR Correlations and Fluctuatio"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [[Star-cf-l] ] Proceeding for SQM2024

 

Dear Boyang,

You have submitted many entries, here I comment on the following file: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/SQM-2024/Measurement-Proton-Xi-Correlation-Functions-Isobar-and-AuAu-Collisions-sqrt-2

Thanks for submitting your proceedings on time.

Please find my comments below:

The title: Proton - /Xi^- -> p-\Xi^- (decide whether you use symbols all names of particles)

Used p-\Xi^-

L10: proton - /Xi^- -> p-\Xi^- (the same comment)

done

L17: the equation of state -> EoS (as already define above)

done

L18: remove: some of these

Interactions[1] -> interactions [1]

done

L19: hyperon-hyperon (Y-Y) -> Y-Y (as already defined)

done

L20: puzzle[2] -> puzzle [2]

done

L22: particle[3] -> particle [3]

done

L23:  high-energy nuclear collisions -> heavy-ion collisions (as we study femtoscopy also in much lower collision energies)

done

L30-3: add that k* and r* are defined in the Pair rest Frame (PRF) reference.

done

L32: distribution of the emitting source -> source function

done

L36: model[4] -> model [4]

done

L37: add a reference to the smoothness approximation

done

Figure 1, description: 10%(left) -> 10% (left), 40%(middle) -> 40% (middle), 80%(right) -> 80% (right),

simulation[5][6] -> simulation [5-6]

done

L45: remove: in the pair rest frame

L46: remove: (Ru+Ru, Zr+Zr)

done

L47: remove track merging and track splitting listed as corrections as you do not correct your correction function on these effects but you apply cuts reducing these detector effects, so they are not correlations

What do you mean by: residual effects (except feed-down that you mention as well)

What do you mean by background effects (extend the description of the last 2 in your text)

We modified this sentence into "The measured genuine correlation function show..."

Yes, the residual effect is related to the feed-down effect so we removed it to avoid confusion.

L49: bins -> classes

CFs -> correlation functions

done

L50: bins ->classes

done

L51: method[7] -> method [7]

done

L52: Coulomb interaction alone -> only Coulomb interaction

done

L52/53: remove” from all centralities.

done

L53: add a reference to HALQCD

done

L55: proton and \Xî -> single particles

done

L56: QCD[5][6] -> QCD [5-6]

done

L57: bins -> classes

done

L59/60: remove: (Ru+Ru, Zr+Zr)

done

L61: remove: to be

done

L62: remove: value

done

L63: remove: rather

done

L67: bins -> classes

done

L70: define dN_{ch}/d_{eta}

add (charged particles rapidity density) behind "dN_{ch}/d_{eta}"

Figurę 3, description: remove: (Ru+Ru, Zr+Zr)

done

L74: remove: (Ru+Ru, Zr+Zr)

done

L77: source size (R_G) -> source size OR -> R_G (as defined before)

done

L79/80: remove: (Ru+Ru, Zr+Zr)

done

I hope it helps,

Thanks,

Hanna

Prof. Hanna Zbroszczyk, PhD, DSc, Eng.

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl
Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:
Warsaw University of Technology
Faculty of Physics
Nuclear Physics Division
Koszykowa 75
Office: 117b (via 115)
00-662 Warsaw, Poland

Wiadomość napisana przez 付博洋 (via star-cf-l Mailing List) <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 09.09.2024, o godz. 08:53:

Deae All,

This is a kindly reminder that I have submitted my proceeding for SQM2024.

Please kindly have a look!

Any comments or suggestions are highly welcome!

Best regards,

Boyang

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