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Re: [[Star-cf-l] ] STAR presentation by Daniel Wielanek for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review

From: Hanna Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>
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Subject: Re: [[Star-cf-l] ] STAR presentation by Daniel Wielanek for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review
Date: Wed, 16 Oct 2024 09:09:39 +0200

Dear Daniel,

Thank you for submitting your proceedings,

Find below my comments:

1. Add line numbers for easier reading

2. Page 2, 4th line: this document -> femstoscopic analysis

3. page 2, 2rd line: name these „some” detectors

4. All equations: make sure you define all mentioned quantities

5. Summary, just mention correlations only as you don’t discuss any fluctuation results.

Kind regards,

Hanna

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Daniel Wielanek (daniel.wielanek AT pw.edu.pl) has submitted a material for a
review, please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69354

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- Re: [[Star-cf-l] ] STAR presentation by Daniel Wielanek for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review, Hanna Zbroszczyk, 10/16/2024
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