STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Wielanek Daniel <Daniel.Wielanek AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Hanna, Mate,

Than you, for your comments. I uploaded newever version.

Pozdrawiam/Best regards,

Daniel Wielanek

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Od: star-cf-l-request AT lists.bnl.gov <star-cf-l-request AT lists.bnl.gov> w imieniu użytkownika Hanna Zbroszczyk <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
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Do: star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov
Temat: Re: [[Star-cf-l] ] STAR presentation by Daniel Wielanek for NTHEP-2024 submitted for review

 

Dear Daniel,

Thank you for submitting your proceedings,

Find below my comments:

1. Add line numbers for easier reading

2. Page 2, 4th line: this document -> femstoscopic analysis

3. page 2, 2rd line: name these „some” detectors

4. All equations: make sure you define all mentioned quantities

5. Summary, just mention correlations only as you don’t discuss any fluctuation results.

Kind regards,

Hanna

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