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Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Hanna Zbroszczyk ( hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Vinh Luong ( lbavinh AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2025/Residual-3rd-body-Coulomb-Effect-Identical-Charged-Pion-Correlations

Comment:
Please find here some modifications, mostly to avoid jargon and repetition of 
 
the same words:
L1: correlation function -> femtoscopy
L2: , and so on. -> etc.
L4: among -> between
L4/5:  remove also, and add in the end of the sentence "as well"
L5: correlation function -> measurement
With those implemented, I sign off.
Hanna

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