STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Vinh Luong <lbavinh AT gmail.com>]

Dear Hanna,

I have modified the abstract accordingly.
Thank you for your comments.

Best,
Vinh

On Sat, Nov 9, 2024 at 7:58 PM <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov> wrote:
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> Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>
> Hanna Zbroszczyk ( hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl ) has commented on a material
> originally submitted by Vinh Luong ( lbavinh AT gmail.com ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2025/Residual-3rd-body-Coulomb-Effect-Identical-Charged-Pion-Correlations
>
> Comment:
> Please find here some modifications, mostly to avoid jargon and repetition 
> of
> the same words:
> L1: correlation function -> femtoscopy
> L2: , and so on. -> etc.
> L4: among -> between
> L4/5:  remove also, and add in the end of the sentence "as well"
> L5: correlation function -> measurement
> With those implemented, I sign off.
> Hanna
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