STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Chunjian,
  Nice abstract, please include the following comments.

General: I think the deformation part of this abstract is a distraction. 
You have already presented it before many times. I would rather suggest 
you to focus on the mean pT fluctuations part with the BES-I data which 
fits the theme of the conference. I would rather focus on the new 
approach and more details about the pT fluctuation observable you're 
using. Btw, in that case you have to send the abstract to CF group.

"Exploring the quadrupole deformation in uranium nuclei and
beam-energy of mean transverse momentum fluctuations in Au+Au
collisions from BES-I program at STAR"
-->
"Exploring the quadrupole deformation in uranium nuclei and
beam-energy dependence of mean transverse momentum fluctuations in Au+Au
collisions from STAR"

"sensitive to initial"
-->
"sensitive to the initial"

" The beam-energy of mean pT fluctuations"
-->
"The beam energy dependence of mean pT fluctuations"


"are also reported"
-->
"will also be reported"

Best,
Prithwish




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