STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Xionghong He <hexh AT impcas.ac.cn>]

Dear Prithwish,

Thank you very much for your comments.
The abstract is updated accordingly and can be found at the same link.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/53533.

Best regards,

Xionghong


在 2021/2/2 22:43, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l 写道:
> Hi Xionghong,
>   Nice abstract, with the following comments incorporate I sign off.
>
> "Light Nuclei v1 and v2 in Au+Au Collisions at √
> 1 sNN = 3 GeV from STAR"
> -->
> I would make it clear that this is a fixed target energy in the title. 
> In fact, you do not say it anywhere in the abstract that this is 
> dataset from the fixed target program of STAR.
>
>
> ", which will reflect"
> -->
> "to understand"
>
> " sum rule and will lead to better understanding"
> -->
> " sum rule and help better understand"
>
> "of several GeV"
> -->
> "of a few GeV"
>
> " colliding two nuclei"
> -->
> " two colliding nuclei
>
> "leads to cross talk"
> -->
> "leads to crosstalk"
> I would prefer
> "leads to interactions"
>
>
> "The light nuclei"
> -->
> "Therefore, the light nuclei"
>
> Line 14, mention that this is fixed target and the year.
>
> "within the framework of nucleon coalescence"
> -->
> "in the context of nucleon coalescence"
>
>
> Best,
> Prithwish
>
>
>
>
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> > Xionghong He (hexh AT impcas.ac.cn) has submitted a material for a review,
> > please have a look:
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