STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Xionghong,
  Nice abstract, with the following comments incorporate I sign off.

"Light Nuclei v1 and v2 in Au+Au Collisions at √
1 sNN = 3 GeV from STAR"
-->
I would make it clear that this is a fixed target energy in the title. 
In fact, you do not say it anywhere in the abstract that this is dataset 
from the fixed target program of STAR.


", which will reflect"
-->
"to understand"

" sum rule and will lead to better understanding"
-->
" sum rule and help better understand"

"of several GeV"
-->
"of a few GeV"

" colliding two nuclei"
-->
" two colliding nuclei

"leads to cross talk"
-->
"leads to crosstalk"
I would prefer
"leads to interactions"


"The light nuclei"
-->
"Therefore, the light nuclei"

Line 14, mention that this is fixed target and the year.

"within the framework of nucleon coalescence"
-->
"in the context of nucleon coalescence"


Best,
Prithwish




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