STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Niseem,
  Looks good, please consider the following suggestions. I'll sign off 
once these are included.

"The beam-energy of the transverse momentum correlations; Implication 
for the η/s
extraction"
-->
"The beam-energy dependence of the transverse momentum correlations and 
implication for the η/s
extraction"

"The ongoing heavy-ion programs’ primary aim is to"
-->
"One of the primary aim of the ongoing heavy-ion programs is to"

Remove "formed in high-energy heavy ion collisions"

"further constraints for more robust extractions of η/s(T)"
-->
"further constraints on the extractions of η/s(T)"

"required for the initial-state and the T"
-->
"required for the uncertainties on the initial-state and the T"

"dependence of η/s.The recent"
-->
"dependence of η/s.(ADD SPACE)The recent"

"correlations, C2(Δη,Δφ)[1,2], and"
-->
"correlations, C2(Δη,Δφ)(ADD SPACE)[1,2], and"


"add an additional constrain"
-->
"add additional constraints"


"are compared with similar studies"
-->
"will be compared to similar measurements"

"to several theoretical calculations"
-->
"to theoretical calculations"

Some general comments/question:

It is not clear what this new observable is C2(Δη,Δφ) does not clearly 
indicate that you're measuring transverse momentum correlations.

Do you think you'll be done with systematics by CPOD

I remember you looked at \rho for three energies:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Flow_PT_5.pdf
Did you look at all other energies for 200-11.5 GeV, if not do you plan 
to update soon ? Or I missed it?


Best,
Prithwish


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