STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[ShinIchi Esumi <esumi.shinichi.gn AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>]

Dear Wei
As Prithwish has already approved, your talk is beautiful and 
you have my sign-off with one minor comment that I would 
have your page.4 (BUR plan) just before your summary, but 
of course, it’s up to you. 
Best regards, ShinIchi

> On Feb 8, 2021, at 21:40, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l 
> <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> 
> Hello Wei,
>  The slides already look good. I sign off with a few minor comments.
> 
> Slide#2: Needs a reference.
> 
> Slide#4: "Endorsed by BNL PAC" --> we can also emphasize that PAC pointed 
> out this to be important to the overall RHIC scientific program and also 
> timely ("Although an O+O run could also be considered in a future year,
> these questions are pressing and topical now")
> 
> Slide#4 or somewhere: It would be good to say say this is an exploratory 
> run.
> 
> Slide#5: This statement about symmetric/asymmetric systems and 
> sub-nucleonic/nucleonic. Is it made in the context of multiplicity 
> distributions (high multiplicity events)? Or is it about what drives v2 and 
> v3? Is this is statement or question? If it's a statement then what is the 
> evidence.
> It would be good to clarify as this is related to STAR-PHENIX debate.
> 
> Slide#7: "(caveat: behavior of nonflow to be investigated)" --> "(caveat: 
> behavior of nonflow needs to be investigated)"
> 
> Slide#8 title: Maybe we write "year 2017" instead of <Run17, this was the 
> detector configuration till year 2017 (we had a small wedge of EPD but 
> still).
> 
> Slide#9 title: Maybe we write "year 2019" as EPD started from 2018 and iTPC 
> from 2019.
> 
> Slide#10: Can you please add "PHENIX" in the middle plot.
> 
> Slide#11: "At the LHC" can be added on the title or somewhere
> 
> Slide#12 & 13: "At the RHIC" can be added on the title or somewhere
> 
> Slide#14: "questions of collectivity" --> "questions on collectivity"
> "STAR proposed a one-week" --> "STAR proposed an exploratory one-week"
> 
> Best,
> Prithwish
> 
> 
> 
> 
> On 2021-02-07 23:57, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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