STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Shaowei,
  Nice abstract, I sign-off with a few minor comments:

Further more --> Furthermore

mean field option --> mean-field

drastically --> considerably or fundamentally

Best,
Prithwish


On 2021-02-26 23:30, Shaowei Lan via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear ShinIchi,
>
> Thank you for your comments and sign-off.
>
> I add the “would” before “dominate"  in the last sentence.
> Please find the updated version at the same link:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/sqm-2021/identified-particle-v1-and-v2-sqrtsnn-3-gev-auau-collisions-star
>
> Thanks,
>
> Shaowei
>
> > 2021年2月26日 上午4:09，ShinIchi Esumi via Star-fcv-l
> > <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> 写道：
> >
> > Dear Shaowei
> > I would sign off your nice abstract with one minor comment
> > that the last sentence would be connected to the previous once,
> > with “, such that … could/would dominate … ”
> > Best regards, ShinIchi
> >
> > > On Feb 24, 2021, at 16:19, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l
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> > > Shaowei Lan (shaoweilan AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn) has submitted a
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