STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Shaowei Lan <shaoweilan AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Prithwish,

Thank you for your comments and sign-off.

I have implemented your comments.

The updated version is at the same link:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/sqm-2021/identified-particle-v1-and-v2-sqrtsnn-3-gev-auau-collisions-star

Thanks,

With best regards,

Shaowei

2021年3月1日 下午4:48，Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> 写道：

Hello Shaowei,
 Nice abstract, I sign-off with a few minor comments:

Further more --> Furthermore

mean field option --> mean-field

drastically --> considerably or fundamentally

Best,
Prithwish


On 2021-02-26 23:30, Shaowei Lan via Star-fcv-l wrote:

Dear ShinIchi,
Thank you for your comments and sign-off.
I add the “would” before “dominate"  in the last sentence.
Please find the updated version at the same link:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/sqm-2021/identified-particle-v1-and-v2-sqrtsnn-3-gev-auau-collisions-star
Thanks,
Shaowei

2021年2月26日 上午4:09，ShinIchi Esumi via Star-fcv-l
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Dear Shaowei
I would sign off your nice abstract with one minor comment
that the last sentence would be connected to the previous once,
with “, such that … could/would dominate … ”
Best regards, ShinIchi

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