STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Egor,
 The proceedings look good. A few minor suggestions on this version:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/NUCLEUS_Procceding_ALPATOV%20%281%29.pdf


General change:
"CP" --> "parity"
"it's" --> "its" unless you mean "it is"
"measured directly" --> "measure directly via the angle of daughter Λ"

Title: "in the STAR experiment" --> "from the STAR experiment"
Abstract: "CP-violating weak decays" --> "parity violating weak decays"

line 9:
"appearing in relativistic heavy-ion collisions"
-->
"produced in relativistic heavy-ion collisions"

line 11: "it’s discovery" --> "its discovery"

line 15: " secondary produced particles" --> "produced particles"

line 17: "CP-violating weak decays" --> "parity violating weak decays"
These decays are parity violating not CP-violating.

line 34: "..lack of experimental input is sensed in differential 
measurements explanations."
I don't understand what you mean by "lack of expt. input", lack of what 
?
Statistics ? Also, why this line is necessary, you're not showing any 
differential measurements.

line 41: "into it's daughter" --> "into its daughter"

line 57: "by it's squared mass" --> "by their squared mass"

line 65: "Spectators event plane" --> "Event plane of the spectator 
neutrons from ZDCs"

line 69: "with usage of East" --> "with the usage of East"

line 78: "After that same procedure" --> "After that the same procedure"

line 80: "<sin Ψ1 - φ^*_{daughter}>" --> "<sin(Ψ1 - φ^*_{daughter})>"

line 84: " Different parts of this equation will refer to
different physical values" -- what do you mean by this. It is not clear.

line 85: "For global polarization term before sin(...) is needed" -- not 
clear what you mean.

line 94: "While A_2 found to be negligible" --> "While A_2 was found to 
be negligible"

line 110: "with bigger statistics" --> "with higher statistics"

line 111: "to separate these results" --> "to measure any possible 
difference between these results"


Best,
Prithwish



On 2021-10-11 14:18, Egor Alpatov via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Hello, Jiangyong
>
> Thank you for comments, I implemented them, please have a look:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/NUCLEUS_Procceding_ALPATOV%20%281%29.pdf
>
> Best regards,
> Egor Alpatov
>
> On Mon, Oct 11, 2021 at 9:08 PM Jiangyong Jia via Star-fcv-l
> <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hi, Egor,
> >
> > Please find a few comments below
> >
> > Jiangyong
> >
> > L4 hot dense -> hot and dense
> > L5 hadrons produced after hadronization->final state hadrons
> >
> > L5 talk->proceedings
> > L14 vortical structure of QGP->QGP possess large vorticitiy
> >
> > L17 due to -> from
> >
> > Fig.1 Resolution of the first order event plane
> >
> > All figure caption should end with "."
> >
> > On 10/11/21 12:17 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> >
> > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Egor Alpatov (egroker1 AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for a
> > > review,
> > > please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/56740
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