STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Alexey,
  The current draft looks good. Here are my comments on this version of 
the proceedings:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ASPovarov_proceeding_NUCLEUS_20_Sep_2021_ver2.pdf

line 17: "the QCD diagramm" --> "the QCD diagram"

line 17: "in wide range" --> "over a wide range of"

line 20: "is born at the initial stages of the QGP evolution" --> "is 
created at the initial stages prior to the QGP evolution"

line 32-33: "Elliptic (υ2) and triangular (υ3) flows" --> "Elliptic (υ2) 
and triangular (υ3) flow coefficients"

line 34-35: "less 2 GeV/c" --> "< 2 GeV/c" or "less than 2 GeV/c"

line 35: "momenta well described" --> "momenta are well described"

line 45-46: "14.5, 19.6, 27 (Run 18), 39, 62.4 GeV were used from beam 
energy scan program phase I and II." --> "14.5, 19.6, 39, 62.4 GeV used 
in this analysis are from the beam energy scan program phase I and 27 
GeV dataset is from the year 2018."

line 53: "as (0.0, -0.89) due to" --> "as (0.0, -0.89 cm) due to "

line 47-57: There is a mixture of "is" and "was", please be consistent.

line 57: " is requiring to" --> "is required to"

line 62: "All tracks required to be " --> "All tracks are required to be 
"

line 69: "2 Sub-event method" --> "two sub-event method"

line 80:  "v3 more dependent on collision geometry....zone[14]" -->"v2 
is more dependent on collision geometric overlap of two nuclei whereas 
v3 is more dependent on fluctuations"

line 89: "plot this figure shows" --> "plot of this figure shows"

line 89: "and the right - negative" --> "and the right shows the same 
for negative particles"

line 90: "multiplied by 2.5" --> "multiplied by 2.5 to improve 
visibility"

line 94: "is presented" --> "are presented"

line 99: "lay on" --> "lie on"

line 107: "flows are" --> "flow measurements are"

Best,
Prithwish








On 2021-10-11 14:36, Alexey Povarov via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Hello, Jiangyong!
>
> Thank you for your comments.
> I updated proceeding on Drupal:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/nucleus-%E2%80%93-2021/scaling-collective-flow-charged-and-identified-hadrons-auau-collision-1
>
> Best regards,
> Alexey Povarov.
>
> пн, 11 окт. 2021 г. в 20:59, Jiangyong Jia via Star-fcv-l
> <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:
>
> > Hi,  Alexey,
> > A few quick comments.
> > Jiangyong
> >
> > L5: create matter->create a hot and dense matter
> > L19: Azimuthal anisotropy in coordinate space->Azimuthal asymmetry
> > in
> > coordinate space
> > L25 number of harmonic-> order of harmonic flow
> > L28 nth -> n^{th}
> > L107: presented->are presented
> > L108 scaling->scaling of v2 and v3
> > L109: trangular flow->v3
> >
> > On 10/11/21 1:28 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Alexey Povarov (povarovas AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for
> > a review,
> > > please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/56741
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