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Aihong Tang ( aihong AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Takafumi Niida ( niida.takafumi.fw AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2022/Hyperon-polarization-along-beam-direction-relative-second-and-thir-0

Comment:
Hi, Takafumi: Nice poster !  Below please find my minor comments.
page 3. "account for" => "accounts for"
page 4. Y-axis title. Isn't it from page 3 that your \alpha_H is positive ?  
Why need a sgn() ?
For bullet statements, you used punctuation on slide 5, but not on other  
slides. Either way is fine but better be consistent.



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