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Aihong Tang ( aihong AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Kosuke Okubo ( det.billups.0917 AT icloud.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2022/Global-polarization-Lambda-%03hyperons-AuAu-sqrtsNN-72-GeV-collisions-

Comment:
Hi, Kosuke :  Very nice result. I am assigned to review your poster. Please  
find my comments below.
Page 1. "at event lower energies" => at "even lower energies".
Page 2. "In non-central collisions". Please don't use bold font to be  
consistent with the box below it.
Page 2. last bullet. "Spin direction of particles and anti-particles are  
aligned in opposite directions due to ...".
Page 3. Suggest to swap the positions of the two boxes at the top. As  
introducing the detector first making more logical sense.
Page 3. It seems that the equation of  "<cos([\psi_1^A - \psi_1^B])>  = ... " 
 
serve no purpose here, as the equation below it is what you directly  
measured.  Please check it.
Page 4. Too many bold font bullets/text.  Please be consistent when using  
bold font among slides.
Page 5. "We completed ..." is not something that sounds like "outlook".  
Please rephrase what you want to say.
Thanks,
Aihong

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