STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[kokubo <kokubo AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Aihong,

Thank you for the comments.
I have implemented them in the new version.

Best regards,
Kosuke

2022-03-28 23:27 に webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l さんは書きました:
> Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>
> Aihong Tang ( aihong AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally
> submitted by Kosuke Okubo ( det.billups.0917 AT icloud.com ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2022/Global-polarization-Lambda-%03hyperons-AuAu-sqrtsNN-72-GeV-collisions-
>
> Comment:
> Hi, Kosuke :  Very nice result. I am assigned to review your poster. 
> Please
> find my comments below.
> Page 1. "at event lower energies" => at "even lower energies".
> Page 2. "In non-central collisions". Please don't use bold font to be
> consistent with the box below it.
> Page 2. last bullet. "Spin direction of particles and anti-particles 
> are
> aligned in opposite directions due to ...".
> Page 3. Suggest to swap the positions of the two boxes at the top. As
> introducing the detector first making more logical sense.
> Page 3. It seems that the equation of  "<cos([\psi_1^A - \psi_1^B])>  = 
> ... "
> serve no purpose here, as the equation below it is what you directly
> measured.  Please check it.
> Page 4. Too many bold font bullets/text.  Please be consistent when 
> using
> bold font among slides.
> Page 5. "We completed ..." is not something that sounds like "outlook".
> Please rephrase what you want to say.
> Thanks,
> Aihong
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