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Aihong Tang ( aihong AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Xingrui Gou ( xgou AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2022/Measurements-Global-Polarization-Hyperons-200-GeV-Isobar-Collisions-

Comment:
Hi,Xingrui:  Very nice study. I am assigned to be a reviewer of your poster.  
Please find my comments below.
Page 2. "STAR Detectors ..." => "STAR detector ...".
Page 2. Left plot. Suggest to move "sqrt(S_NN)=200 GeV" out of the legend, as 
 
it is common to both. But put it near the bottom of the plot.   Right plot.  
"Ru&Zr" may be interpreted colliding Ru with Zr.   Suggest to change it to  
"Ru+Ru & Zr+Zr". You may want to move the sqrt(S_NN) line below it to fit.
Page 3. Title. "in Ru+Ru, Zr+Zr" => "in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr collisions at 200  
GeV".
page 3, second bullet. "at Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr collisions" => "in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr 
 
collisions".
Page 4. for both plots, I suggest to move "sqrt(S_NN)=200 GeV" out of legends 
 
and put it somewhere else in the plot.
       "no collision system dependence."=>"no collision system dependence is  
observed".
Page 5. "in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr _collisions_ at ...".
Page 5. third sub bullet. "collision" => "collisions".   "no collision system 
 
dependence is observed.".

  Thanks,
Aihong

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