STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[xgou <xgou AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Aihong and all,

  Thanks for your comments.
  I have updated my poster, you can find here:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2022/Measurements-Global-Polarization-Hyperons-200-GeV-Isobar-Collisions-

Best regards,
Xingrui Gou

> Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>
> Aihong Tang ( aihong AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally
> submitted by Xingrui Gou ( xgou AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2022/Measurements-Global-Polarization-Hyperons-200-GeV-Isobar-Collisions-
>
> Comment:
> Hi,Xingrui:  Very nice study. I am assigned to be a reviewer of your 
> poster.
> Please find my comments below.
> Page 2. "STAR Detectors ..." => "STAR detector ...".
> Page 2. Left plot. Suggest to move "sqrt(S_NN)=200 GeV" out of the 
> legend, as
> it is common to both. But put it near the bottom of the plot.   Right 
> plot.
> "Ru&Zr" may be interpreted colliding Ru with Zr.   Suggest to change it 
> to
> "Ru+Ru & Zr+Zr". You may want to move the sqrt(S_NN) line below it to 
> fit.
> Page 3. Title. "in Ru+Ru, Zr+Zr" => "in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr collisions at 
> 200
> GeV".
> page 3, second bullet. "at Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr collisions" => "in Ru+Ru and 
> Zr+Zr
> collisions".
> Page 4. for both plots, I suggest to move "sqrt(S_NN)=200 GeV" out of 
> legends
> and put it somewhere else in the plot.
>        "no collision system dependence."=>"no collision system 
> dependence is
> observed".
> Page 5. "in Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr _collisions_ at ...".
> Page 5. third sub bullet. "collision" => "collisions".   "no collision 
> system
> dependence is observed.".
>
>   Thanks,
> Aihong
>
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