STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Egor Alpatov <egroker1 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Subhash,

Thank you very much for your comments, I implemented them in my presentation.

New version can be found be the link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/NUCLEUS2022_v2.pdf

Best regards,

Egor Alpatov

On Fri, Jul 1, 2022 at 6:08 AM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Egor,

Nice results. I have the following comments for your consideration:

slide#2: "with the direction of vorticity" --> along the direction of
vorticity

slide#6: You can indicate the numbers on the brackets are the
eta-acceptance

slide#7: Can you increase the figures and fonts of legend?

slide#8: "term is what we’re looking for" --> term is the polarization
signal.
At which place you apply EP resolution, could you mention here?

slide#9: "Pin-down model at low collision energies" --> Constrain models
at low collision energies
"High-statistics datasets" --> High-statistics BES-II datasets

slide#10: Suggest re-ordering bullets, first mention main observations,
ie, non-zero positive Xi polarization, then comparison among species,
energies, then model at the last
Suggest to remove conference name from the legend of the figure.


slide#11: 1st bullet:  I suggest to mention help understand QCD spin
dynamics or vorticity of QGP medium"

"helps to check model predictions and theory explanations" --> It can be
a sub-bullet and you can use something like: data can help constrain
models.

2nd bullet: "... polarization splitting" --> ... polarization splitting,
expected from initial magnetic-field

3rd bullet, you can add "....within uncertainties, indicating a global
nature of polarization"

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

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