STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Dhananjaya Thakur <thakurdhana AT gmail.com>]

Dear Subhash,

Thanks a lot!

I have updated the proceedings and deleted the old versions.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Hot_qcd_dthakur_v4_0.pdf

With best regards

Dhananjaya

On Tue, Jul 5, 2022 at 6:50 AM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Dhananjaya,

I am signing off and sending it to star-talks with one additional
suggestion.
line 108-109:  This could be due to the fact that ...

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2022-07-05 02:00 AM, Dhananjaya Thakur wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
> Kindly have a look on the updated proceedings and give your feedback.
>
> 10th of July is the last date for the submission.
>
> Thank you.
> With best regards
> Dhananjaya
>
> On Fri, Jul 1, 2022 at 1:59 PM Dhananjaya Thakur
> <thakurdhana AT gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Dear Subhash,
>> Thanks a lot for the comment and suggestions. I have implemented all
>> in v3.
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Hot_qcd_dthakur_v3.pdf
>>
>> Kindly, have a look.
>>
>> Thank you.
>> With regards
>> Dhananjaya
>>
>> On Fri, Jul 1, 2022 at 9:37 AM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Dear Dhananjaya,
>>>
>>> Thanks for the updated proceedings. I have a few more comments to
>>> your
>>> version2
>>>
>>
> ((https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Hot_qcd_dthakur_v2.pdf):).
>>>
>>> Please fix all the references/citations, they don't show up in the
>>> pdf
>>> file.
>>>
>>> line 16: we present
>>> line 19: remove "as function of rapidity"
>>> line 44: The interplay of competing Faraday and Hall effects can
>>> influence the v1
>>> line 49: Suggest "On the other hand, both protons and antiprotons
>>> can
>>> have negative v1 slope due to contribution other than transported
>>> quarks, e.g. the tilted source."
>>> line 68-71: You can consider splitting the sentence
>>> tracks that had transverse momenta, --> tracks that have
>>> transverse
>>> momenta,
>>> had at least 15 space point --> have at least 15 space point
>>> line 73: define sigma_R
>>> "To ensure the purity of identified particles, we applied the cut"
>>> -->
>>> To ensure the purity of identified particles, we select particles
>>> with
>>> momentum smaller than  ...
>>> line 76: "applied the restriction on the" --> select particles
>>> within
>>> mass-square range of ...
>>> line 90: passing through
>>> line 102: can contribute
>>> line 110-114: The sign of delta_v1 for pions can be negative due
>>> to
>>> transported and EM field, so we can't distinguish them. Fix the
>>> sentences accordingly.
>>> line 122: "... central collisions may be due to transported quark"
>>> -->
>>> central collisions could be accommodated by transported quark
>>> contribution.
>>>
>>> I sign off once these are addressed.
>>>
>>> Thanks and regards,
>>> Subhash
>>>
>>> On 2022-06-27 06:31 PM, subhash wrote:
>>>> Dear Dhananjaya,
>>>>
>>>> Nice proceedings. I have appended my comments to the pdf file
>>> at:
>>>>
>>>
>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/dthakur_hotqcd_0_SS.pdf
>>>>
>>>> Thanks and regards,
>>>> Subhash
>>>>
>>>> On 2022-06-24 03:43 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
>>>>> Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>>>>>
>>>>> Dhananjaya Thakur (thakurdhana AT gmail.com) has submitted a
>>> material for
>>>>> a
>>>>> review, please have a look:
>>>>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60046
>>>>>
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