STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Dhananjaya,

I am signing off and sending it to star-talks with one additional 
suggestion.
line 108-109:  This could be due to the fact that ...

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2022-07-05 02:00 AM, Dhananjaya Thakur wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
> Kindly have a look on the updated proceedings and give your feedback.
>
> 10th of July is the last date for the submission.
>
> Thank you.
> With best regards
> Dhananjaya
>
> On Fri, Jul 1, 2022 at 1:59 PM Dhananjaya Thakur
> <thakurdhana AT gmail.com> wrote:
>
> > Dear Subhash,
> > Thanks a lot for the comment and suggestions. I have implemented all
> > in v3.
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Hot_qcd_dthakur_v3.pdf
> >
> > Kindly, have a look.
> >
> > Thank you.
> > With regards
> > Dhananjaya
> >
> > On Fri, Jul 1, 2022 at 9:37 AM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > wrote:
> >
> > > Dear Dhananjaya,
> > >
> > > Thanks for the updated proceedings. I have a few more comments to
> > > your
> > > version2
> ((https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Hot_qcd_dthakur_v2.pdf):).
> > > Please fix all the references/citations, they don't show up in the
> > > pdf
> > > file.
> > >
> > > line 16: we present
> > > line 19: remove "as function of rapidity"
> > > line 44: The interplay of competing Faraday and Hall effects can
> > > influence the v1
> > > line 49: Suggest "On the other hand, both protons and antiprotons
> > > can
> > > have negative v1 slope due to contribution other than transported
> > > quarks, e.g. the tilted source."
> > > line 68-71: You can consider splitting the sentence
> > > tracks that had transverse momenta, --> tracks that have
> > > transverse
> > > momenta,
> > > had at least 15 space point --> have at least 15 space point
> > > line 73: define sigma_R
> > > "To ensure the purity of identified particles, we applied the cut"
> > > -->
> > > To ensure the purity of identified particles, we select particles
> > > with
> > > momentum smaller than  ...
> > > line 76: "applied the restriction on the" --> select particles
> > > within
> > > mass-square range of ...
> > > line 90: passing through
> > > line 102: can contribute
> > > line 110-114: The sign of delta_v1 for pions can be negative due
> > > to
> > > transported and EM field, so we can't distinguish them. Fix the
> > > sentences accordingly.
> > > line 122: "... central collisions may be due to transported quark"
> > > -->
> > > central collisions could be accommodated by transported quark
> > > contribution.
> > >
> > > I sign off once these are addressed.
> > >
> > > Thanks and regards,
> > > Subhash
> > >
> > > On 2022-06-27 06:31 PM, subhash wrote:
> > > > Dear Dhananjaya,
> > > >
> > > > Nice proceedings. I have appended my comments to the pdf file
> > > at:
> > > >
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/dthakur_hotqcd_0_SS.pdf
> > > > Thanks and regards,
> > > > Subhash
> > > >
> > > > On 2022-06-24 03:43 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > >
> > > > > Dhananjaya Thakur (thakurdhana AT gmail.com) has submitted a
> > > material for
> > > > > a
> > > > > review, please have a look:
> > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60046
> > > > >
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