STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Dhananjaya Thakur <thakurdhana AT gmail.com>]

Dear Subhash,

Kindly have a look on the updated proceedings and give your feedback.

10th of July is the last date for the submission.

Thank you.

With best regards

Dhananjaya

On Fri, Jul 1, 2022 at 1:59 PM Dhananjaya Thakur <thakurdhana AT gmail.com> wrote:

Dear Subhash,

Thanks a lot for the comment and suggestions. I have implemented all in v3.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Hot_qcd_dthakur_v3.pdf

Kindly, have a look.

Thank you.

With regards

Dhananjaya

On Fri, Jul 1, 2022 at 9:37 AM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Dhananjaya,

Thanks for the updated proceedings. I have a few more comments to your
version2
((https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Hot_qcd_dthakur_v2.pdf):).

Please fix all the references/citations, they don't show up in the pdf
file.

line 16: we present
line 19: remove "as function of rapidity"
line 44: The interplay of competing Faraday and Hall effects can
influence the v1
line 49: Suggest "On the other hand, both protons and antiprotons can
have negative v1 slope due to contribution other than transported
quarks, e.g. the tilted source."
line 68-71: You can consider splitting the sentence
tracks that had transverse momenta, --> tracks that have transverse
momenta,
had at least 15 space point --> have at least 15 space point
line 73: define sigma_R
"To ensure the purity of identified particles, we applied the cut" -->
To ensure the purity of identified particles, we select particles with
momentum smaller than  ...
line 76: "applied the restriction on the" --> select particles within
mass-square range of ...
line 90: passing through
line 102: can contribute
line 110-114: The sign of delta_v1 for pions can be negative due to
transported and EM field, so we can't distinguish them. Fix the
sentences accordingly.
line 122: "... central collisions may be due to transported quark" -->
central collisions could be accommodated by transported quark
contribution.

I sign off once these are addressed.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash


On 2022-06-27 06:31 PM, subhash wrote:
> Dear Dhananjaya,
>
> Nice proceedings. I have appended my comments to the pdf file at:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/dthakur_hotqcd_0_SS.pdf
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
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