STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Dhananjaya,

Thanks for the updated proceedings. I have a few more comments to your 
version2
((https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Hot_qcd_dthakur_v2.pdf):).

Please fix all the references/citations, they don't show up in the pdf 
file.

line 16: we present
line 19: remove "as function of rapidity"
line 44: The interplay of competing Faraday and Hall effects can 
influence the v1
line 49: Suggest "On the other hand, both protons and antiprotons can 
have negative v1 slope due to contribution other than transported 
quarks, e.g. the tilted source."
line 68-71: You can consider splitting the sentence
tracks that had transverse momenta, --> tracks that have transverse 
momenta,
had at least 15 space point --> have at least 15 space point
line 73: define sigma_R
"To ensure the purity of identified particles, we applied the cut" --> 
To ensure the purity of identified particles, we select particles with 
momentum smaller than  ...
line 76: "applied the restriction on the" --> select particles within 
mass-square range of ...
line 90: passing through
line 102: can contribute
line 110-114: The sign of delta_v1 for pions can be negative due to 
transported and EM field, so we can't distinguish them. Fix the 
sentences accordingly.
line 122: "... central collisions may be due to transported quark" --> 
central collisions could be accommodated by transported quark 
contribution.

I sign off once these are addressed.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash


On 2022-06-27 06:31 PM, subhash wrote:
> Dear Dhananjaya,
>
> Nice proceedings. I have appended my comments to the pdf file at:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/dthakur_hotqcd_0_SS.pdf
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
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