STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Niseem,
   Nice slides, please consider a few minor comments.

Your two different notations for \it p_T and p_T maybe confusing (see 
for example slide#4 first line.

Slide#4: "softer for RHIC" --> "smaller for RHIC"
I am not sure I follow this last bullet, where are you showing the slope 
?


Revise the last bullet on slide#11 as you don't shown \rho(v_3^2,pT) on 
this slide.

slide#12 "little change with beam energy" --> "no significant energy 
dependence within the systematic uncertainties"  (the same comment 
applies for slide#13 & conclusion slide, please avoid saying "little 
change" everywhere)

conclusion: I am not sure it's ok to say "pT-flow", I would either spell 
it out (transverse momentum-flow) or just say pT-vn and be consistent 
throughout the talk.

Best,
Prithwish




On 2022-07-15 16:29, Niseem Magdy via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Hi Subhash,
>
> The slides are updated at the same link.
>
> Thanks,
> Niseem
>
> On 7/15/22 12:49 PM, subhash wrote:
> > Dear Niseem,
> >
> > Very nice and comprehensive slides. I sign off with a few super minor 
> > suggestions:
> >
> > I believe this is a STAR talk. So, please use supported in part by DOE 
> > in the first slide, add (for STAR collaboration).
> > s#2: Motivation first bullet, too many "and"s consider adding commas.
> > s#4: top panels could you indicate these are AMPT calculations
> > s#12,13: show little change with beam energy
> >
> > Thanks and regards,
> > Subhash
> >
> > On 2022-07-12 02:09 AM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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