STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Niseem Magdy <niseemmagdy AT yahoo.com>]

Hi Prithwish ,

The slides are updated at the same link.

Thanks,
Niseem

On 7/16/22 8:41 PM, Prithwish Tribedy wrote:
> Hi Niseem,
>    Nice slides, please consider a few minor comments.
>
> Your two different notations for \it p_T and p_T maybe confusing (see 
> for example slide#4 first line.
>
> Slide#4: "softer for RHIC" --> "smaller for RHIC"
> I am not sure I follow this last bullet, where are you showing the 
> slope ?
>
>
> Revise the last bullet on slide#11 as you don't shown \rho(v_3^2,pT) 
> on this slide.
>
> slide#12 "little change with beam energy" --> "no significant energy 
> dependence within the systematic uncertainties"  (the same comment 
> applies for slide#13 & conclusion slide, please avoid saying "little 
> change" everywhere)
>
> conclusion: I am not sure it's ok to say "pT-flow", I would either 
> spell it out (transverse momentum-flow) or just say pT-vn and be 
> consistent throughout the talk.
>
> Best,
> Prithwish
>
>
>
>
> On 2022-07-15 16:29, Niseem Magdy via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > Hi Subhash,
> >
> > The slides are updated at the same link.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Niseem
> >
> > On 7/15/22 12:49 PM, subhash wrote:
> > > Dear Niseem,
> > >
> > > Very nice and comprehensive slides. I sign off with a few super 
> > > minor suggestions:
> > >
> > > I believe this is a STAR talk. So, please use supported in part by 
> > > DOE in the first slide, add (for STAR collaboration).
> > > s#2: Motivation first bullet, too many "and"s consider adding commas.
> > > s#4: top panels could you indicate these are AMPT calculations
> > > s#12,13: show little change with beam energy
> > >
> > > Thanks and regards,
> > > Subhash
> > >
> > > On 2022-07-12 02:09 AM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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