STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Dear Ashik,

Thanks for updating the proceedings. I have a few additional suggestions 
for your consideration:

cosmetic: please use "\mathrm" for s_{\mathrm NN}, p_{\mathrm T}, etc 
consistently across the proceedings.

line 55: In this proceedings,
You could mention other particle species as well.

line 61-67: Please  reformat it. You could do like: "The main 
sub-detectors are (i) Time Projection Chamber (TPC) (|η| ≤ 1): used for 
charged particle tracking, vertexing, and particle identification; (ii) 
Time-Of-Flight (TOF) detector: used for ...."

line 72-74: add comma with the "and"s
line 74 -78: You could rephrase it in a better way
line 77: <dE/dx> --> \langle \rangle

line 78: remove "within 0.2 < pT < 5 GeV/c"

line 81: "Statistical fluctuations ...systematic uncertainties." Either 
remove this line or add a few lines for the estimation of systematic 
uncertainties before this sentence.

I sign off with these addressed.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2022-07-25 11:54 PM, ASHIK IKBAL wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
>
> Thanks for your nice comments. I have incorporated them all in this
> version:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/qm_proc_ashik_ver3.pdf
>
> Thanks,
> Ashik
>
> On Sun, Jul 24, 2022 at 10:11 PM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> wrote:
>
> > Dear Ashik,
> >
> > Nice proceedings. I have appended my comments here:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/qm_proc_ashik_ver2_SS.pdf
> > Please also consider the cautions raised by PAs of delta_v1 PRX
> > paper
> > (Diyu et.al.), and make necessary adjustments in the proceedings.
> >
> > Thanks and regards,
> > Subhash
> >
> > On 2022-07-19 12:06 AM, ASHIK IKBAL wrote:
> > > Dear Subhash,
> > >
> > > Thanks! I have tried to make it within the page limit: Please have
> > a
> > > look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/qm_proc_ashik_ver2.pdf
> > > Thanks,
> > > Ashik
> > >
> > > On Mon, Jul 18, 2022 at 4:10 AM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > > wrote:
> > >
> > > > Dear Ashik,
> > > >
> > > > QM proceedings has a strict page limit: 6 for parallel, 8 for
> > > > plenary
> > > > and 4 for flash talks. Please remove some contents and adjust
> > within
> > > > the
> > > > limit.
> > > >
> > > > Thanks and regards,
> > > > Subhash
> > > >
> > > > On 2022-07-18 12:03 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > >
> > > > > Ashik Ikbal Sheikh (ashikhep AT gmail.com) has submitted a material
> > > > for a
> > > > > review, please have a look:
> > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60310
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>
> Ashik Ikbal
>
> Research Associate
> Kent State University
> Department Of Physics
>
> Kent, OH 44242, USA
>
> Contact no.s: +1 631-504-7647 (USA)
>
>                       +91 8250216234 (India)
>
> Alternate e-mails: asheikh2 AT kent.edu
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