STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[ASHIK IKBAL <ashikhep AT gmail.com>]

Dear Subhash,

Thanks for your further comments. I have taken care of all of them. Please have a look: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/qm_proc_ver4.pdf

Thanks,

Ashik 

On Tue, Jul 26, 2022 at 9:41 PM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Ashik,

Thanks for updating the proceedings. I have a few additional suggestions
for your consideration:

cosmetic: please use "\mathrm" for s_{\mathrm NN}, p_{\mathrm T}, etc
consistently across the proceedings.

line 55: In this proceedings,
You could mention other particle species as well.

line 61-67: Please  reformat it. You could do like: "The main
sub-detectors are (i) Time Projection Chamber (TPC) (|η| ≤ 1): used for
charged particle tracking, vertexing, and particle identification; (ii)
Time-Of-Flight (TOF) detector: used for ...."

line 72-74: add comma with the "and"s
line 74 -78: You could rephrase it in a better way
line 77: <dE/dx> --> \langle \rangle

line 78: remove "within 0.2 < pT < 5 GeV/c"

line 81: "Statistical fluctuations ...systematic uncertainties." Either
remove this line or add a few lines for the estimation of systematic
uncertainties before this sentence.

I sign off with these addressed.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2022-07-25 11:54 PM, ASHIK IKBAL wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
>
> Thanks for your nice comments. I have incorporated them all in this
> version:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/qm_proc_ashik_ver3.pdf
>
> Thanks,
> Ashik
>
> On Sun, Jul 24, 2022 at 10:11 PM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> wrote:
>
>> Dear Ashik,
>>
>> Nice proceedings. I have appended my comments here:
>>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/qm_proc_ashik_ver2_SS.pdf
>>
>> Please also consider the cautions raised by PAs of delta_v1 PRX
>> paper
>> (Diyu et.al.), and make necessary adjustments in the proceedings.
>>
>> Thanks and regards,
>> Subhash
>>
>> On 2022-07-19 12:06 AM, ASHIK IKBAL wrote:
>>> Dear Subhash,
>>>
>>> Thanks! I have tried to make it within the page limit: Please have
>> a
>>> look:
>>>
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/qm_proc_ashik_ver2.pdf
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>> Ashik
>>>
>>> On Mon, Jul 18, 2022 at 4:10 AM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Dear Ashik,
>>>>
>>>> QM proceedings has a strict page limit: 6 for parallel, 8 for
>>>> plenary
>>>> and 4 for flash talks. Please remove some contents and adjust
>> within
>>>> the
>>>> limit.
>>>>
>>>> Thanks and regards,
>>>> Subhash
>>>>
>>>> On 2022-07-18 12:03 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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>>>>>
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>>>> for a
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>>>
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>
> --
>
> Ashik Ikbal
>
> Research Associate
> Kent State University
> Department Of Physics
>
> Kent, OH 44242, USA
>
> Contact no.s: +1 631-504-7647 (USA)
>
>                       +91 8250216234 (India)
>
> Alternate e-mails: asheikh2 AT kent.edu
>                              ashik AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov
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Ashik Ikbal

Research Associate

Kent State University

Department Of Physics

Kent, OH 44242, USA

Contact no.s: +1 631-504-7647 (USA)

                      +91 8250216234 (India)

Alternate e-mails: asheikh2 AT kent.edu

                             ashik AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov

                             ashik.ikbal.sheikh AT cern.ch