STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Chun-Jian Zhang <chun-jian.zhang AT stonybrook.edu>]

Dear Haojie,

I was requested by Convenors to give some comments on your nice draft. Please find my comments below:

Line11: <\deltap_T^2>/<deltap_T>^2) ---> <\deltap_T^2>/<p_T>^2

Line 67: remove “parton”

Line 67: need a blank space before (AMPT)

Line 75: “We also show in Fig.1 right panel the mean p_T fluctuations R(<\deltap_T^2>/<deltap_T>^2)” —> “We also show in Fig.1 right panel the isobar ratios of the mean p_T fluctuations R(<\deltap_T^2>/<p_T>^2)” 

Fig1 caption:  <\deltap_T^2>/<deltap_T>^2) ---> <\deltap_T^2>/<p_T>^2

Line 91: ...as a function of…

Fig2 caption: …as a function of…

Fig4 caption: …as a function of…

Line126: ...with a compilation of…. 

Line 133: “…, mean transverse momentum …” —> add “and” before the comma,

Line 135, add a comma, before “…and neutron skin …”

Line 135: thicknessses ->  thicknesses

Best regards

Chunjian 

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Haojie Xu (haojiexu AT zjhu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a review,  
please have a look:
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