STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[haojiexu <haojiexu AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Chunjian,

Thank you for the suggestions. The new version can be found from this 
link:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2022Proceeding-HaojieXuv2.pdf

with best regards,
Haojie

On 2022-07-28 21:11, Chun-Jian Zhang via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear Haojie,
>
> I was requested by Convenors to give some comments on your nice draft.
> Please find my comments below:
>
> Line11: <\deltap_T^2>/<deltap_T>^2) ---> <\deltap_T^2>/<p_T>^2
> Line 67: remove “parton”
> Line 67: need a blank space before (AMPT)
>
> Line 75: “We also show in Fig.1 right panel the mean p_T
> fluctuations R(<\deltap_T^2>/<deltap_T>^2)” —> “We also show in
> Fig.1 right panel the isobar ratios of the mean p_T fluctuations
> R(<\deltap_T^2>/<p_T>^2)”
> Fig1 caption:  <\deltap_T^2>/<deltap_T>^2) ---> <\deltap_T^2>/<p_T>^2
> Line 91: ...as a function of…
> Fig2 caption: …as a function of…
> Fig4 caption: …as a function of…
> Line126: ...with a compilation of….
> Line 133: “…, mean transverse momentum …” —> add “and”
> before the comma,
> Line 135, add a comma, before “…and neutron skin …”
> Line 135: thicknessses ->  thicknesses
>
> Best regards
> Chunjian
>
> > On Jul 26, 2022, at 8:42 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l
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> >
> > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Haojie Xu (haojiexu AT zjhu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
> > review,
> > please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60412
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