STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Dear Xingrui,

Nice proceedings. Here are my suggestions for your consideration:

In General add an extra space between end of line and reference. e.g. in 
line 23 "spin-orbital interaction [1]."
line 8: system's
line 25: in parent's rest frame
line 29: Those models --> Some models; also add references for model 
studies.
line 30: system size dependence of ...
line 42, Fig. 1 Caption: space between 200 and GeV
line 44: first-order event plane can be determined by ...
you can spell out ZDC-SMD and TPC here.
you can mention lambda-bar decay channel in bracket
line 45: Here and elsewhere use \mathrm{Res}, \mathrm{sin}, etc

line 47: Use consistently either P_{H} or P_{Lambda}
line 48: I think better to say, increases from central to peripheral ...
line 58: system size dependence

Figure 3 Caption: Correct typo "acceptance". Remove "shown inside the 
figure"
line 62-63: add respectively.
line 65: space between Fig.3 (right). Similarly add extra space at 
Figure 4 captions.

I sign off with these addressed.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash



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