STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[xgou <xgou AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Subhash,

  Thank you very much for your comments and sign-off!

  I have implemented your comments and uploaded the new version here:
  https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60590

Thanks and best regards,
Xingrui

> Dear Xingrui,
>
> Nice proceedings. Here are my suggestions for your consideration:
>
> In General add an extra space between end of line and reference. e.g.
> in line 23 "spin-orbital interaction [1]."
> line 8: system's
> line 25: in parent's rest frame
> line 29: Those models --> Some models; also add references for model 
> studies.
> line 30: system size dependence of ...
> line 42, Fig. 1 Caption: space between 200 and GeV
> line 44: first-order event plane can be determined by ...
> you can spell out ZDC-SMD and TPC here.
> you can mention lambda-bar decay channel in bracket
> line 45: Here and elsewhere use \mathrm{Res}, \mathrm{sin}, etc
>
> line 47: Use consistently either P_{H} or P_{Lambda}
> line 48: I think better to say, increases from central to peripheral 
> ...
> line 58: system size dependence
>
> Figure 3 Caption: Correct typo "acceptance". Remove "shown inside the 
> figure"
> line 62-63: add respectively.
> line 65: space between Fig.3 (right). Similarly add extra space at
> Figure 4 captions.
>
> I sign off with these addressed.
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
>
>
> On 2022-08-23 02:52 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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> > review,
> > please have a look:
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> >
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