STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Egor Alpatov <egroker1 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Subhash,

Thank ypu for your comments, I updated my proceedings: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/NUCLEUS2022%20%282%29.pdf

Thanks and regards,

Egor Alpatov

On Wed, Sep 21, 2022 at 12:26 PM subhash via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Egor,

Nice proceedings. Here are my suggestions:

General, for text subscripts, you can use \mathrm{}
l#2: experimentT --> experiment
abstract:
its vortical nature
In these proceedings, we report ..
remove measurement

l-6,7: replace hyphen "-" with a comma
possess --> can possess
l#8: remove "its"
l#10: decays,

l#41: define TOF,  protons and pionS
l#43-45: mention KFP if you used it here

l#46-48: Remove "overlapping between colliding nuclei"
add a reference for centrality and Glauber

l#51-53:
rephrase the lines to something like

The first-order event plane, a proxy for reaction plane, is
reconstructed using the spectator particles ....

Global polarization includes correction for event plane resolution

l#56: detach --> differentiate

l#62: presents
l#63: due to smaller signal --> I believe due to poor statistics for
less abundant particls, right? The polarization signal is comparable to
that of lambda.
l#64: These results are compared with that from ...
l#69: within large uncertainties

Fig. 1
Some of the legends are touching axis, if you could fix that would be
good.
Caption: Collision energy dependence of ...

References:
Please unify the format of journal references, some has article title,
some don't.
We probably don't need all author names for 5+ author papers, or
collaboration papers, please check the requirements with the proceedings
journal to be submitted.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

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