STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Diyu,
  Is this the final version:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/files/Abstract_2.pdf

The link on this page doesn't work:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/62544
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Abstract_2.pdf

Here are my comments on your abstract. With these included I sign off 
your talk.

Line #3:
"insights to the"
-->
"insights on the effect of"

"EM filed"
-->
"EM field"

"Here we" --> "Here, we"


Best,
Prithwish


On 2023-02-15 11:54, subhash via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear Diyu,
>
> Nice abstract. I sign off with the following suggestions for your 
> consideration:
>
> line 2,3: "The directed flow between .... contributions to their
> rapidity-odd directed flow" --> Due to such EM field, particles and
> anti-particles with opposite charges will receive opposite
> contributions in their rapidity-odd directed flow (v1(y)).
>
> Remove: "and therefore .... the EM filed."
>
> line 6: A clear difference in dv1/dy between positively and negatively
> charged hadrons (Delta dv1/dy)....
>
> Faraday induction and Coulomb effect --> You could add a reference
> here in the abstract.
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
> On 2023-02-15 09:05 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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> >
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