STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[dshen <dshen AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Subhash and Prithwish,

Thanks for your comments, I have updated the abstract with your comments 
implemented.
The old version was deleted as it cannot be opened for some reasons.

Thanks,
Diyu


On 2023-02-16 05:36, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Hi Diyu,
>   Is this the final version:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/files/Abstract_2.pdf
>
> The link on this page doesn't work:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/62544
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Abstract_2.pdf
>
> Here are my comments on your abstract. With these included I sign off 
> your talk.
>
> Line #3:
> "insights to the"
> -->
> "insights on the effect of"
>
> "EM filed"
> -->
> "EM field"
>
> "Here we" --> "Here, we"
>
>
> Best,
> Prithwish
>
>
> On 2023-02-15 11:54, subhash via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > Dear Diyu,
> >
> > Nice abstract. I sign off with the following suggestions for your 
> > consideration:
> >
> > line 2,3: "The directed flow between .... contributions to their
> > rapidity-odd directed flow" --> Due to such EM field, particles and
> > anti-particles with opposite charges will receive opposite
> > contributions in their rapidity-odd directed flow (v1(y)).
> >
> > Remove: "and therefore .... the EM filed."
> >
> > line 6: A clear difference in dv1/dy between positively and negatively
> > charged hadrons (Delta dv1/dy)....
> >
> > Faraday induction and Coulomb effect --> You could add a reference
> > here in the abstract.
> >
> > Thanks and regards,
> > Subhash
> >
> > On 2023-02-15 09:05 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Diyu Shen (dyshen AT fudan.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a 
> > > review, please
> > > have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/62544
> > >
> > > Deadline: 2023-02-28
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