STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Chunjian,

Nice abstract. I have a few additional suggestions for your 
consideration:

l#2:  Collisions of deformed nuclei,
Probably, you can remove ", in particular,", which makes the sentence 
read smoother.

l#15: I would suggest: "Combining all these observables, we can 
precisely constrain various nuclear deformations in isobar nuclei."

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2023-04-21 01:37 PM, zhchen via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Hi Chunjian,
>
> Nice abstract. I sign off with minor suggestions
> - in general, you can put ", beta~x" into brackets to make the text 
> smoother
> - line 6: please define [pT]
> - line 15: "require" -> "requires"
>
> Cheers,
> Zhenyu
>
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