STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Chunjian Zhang <czhang.phys AT gmail.com>]

Dear Prithwish,

Thank you for the insightful comments. With implementing all your useful comments, please find the new version at https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Imaging-shape-atomic-nuclei-high-energy-nuclear-collisions-STAR 

Cheers,

Chunjian 

On Apr 21, 2023, at 10:40 PM, Chunjian Zhang <czhang.phys AT gmail.com> wrote:

Dear Subhash,

Thank you for the insightful comments. With implementing all your useful comments, please find the new version at https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Imaging-shape-atomic-nuclei-high-energy-nuclear-collisions-STAR 

Cheers,

Chunjian 

On Apr 21, 2023, at 4:08 AM, subhash via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Chunjian,

Nice abstract. I have a few additional suggestions for your consideration:

l#2:  Collisions of deformed nuclei,
Probably, you can remove ", in particular,", which makes the sentence read smoother.

l#15: I would suggest: "Combining all these observables, we can precisely constrain various nuclear deformations in isobar nuclei."

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2023-04-21 01:37 PM, zhchen via Star-fcv-l wrote:

Hi Chunjian,
Nice abstract. I sign off with minor suggestions
- in general, you can put ", beta~x" into brackets to make the text smoother
- line 6: please define [pT]
- line 15: "require" -> "requires"
Cheers,
Zhenyu
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