STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Chunjian Zhang <czhang.phys AT gmail.com>]

Dear Prithwish,

Thank you for the insightful comments. With implementing all your useful comments, please find the new version at https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Imaging-shape-atomic-nuclei-high-energy-nuclear-collisions-STAR 

Cheers,

Chunjian 

On Apr 21, 2023, at 4:02 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by ChunJian Zhang ( czhang.phys AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Imaging-shape-atomic-nuclei-high-energy-nuclear-collisions-STAR

Comment:
Comment on version#1 (Prithwish):,,,

Nice abstract, here are my comments,,,

"Nuclear structure collective properties" -->
"The collective properties of nuclear structure" ,,,

"in the initial states and final states of " -->
"in the initial and consequently final stages of" ,,,

"harmonic flow vn " -->
"harmonic flow coefficients vn",,,

"an easy route" -->
"a viable approach",,,

"$\beta_{2,U} \sim 0.28$ and $\gamma_U \sim 0$." -->
"with $\beta_{2,U} \sim 0.28$ and $\gamma_U \sim 0$.",,,

"diffuseness difference between $^{96}$Ru and $^{96}$Zr" -->
"diffuseness difference between $^{96}$Ru and $^{96}$Zr in the model  
calculations",,,

"various nuclear deformations" -->
"parameters associated with various nuclear deformations",,,

"Our results provide the first observation and quantitative extraction" -->
"Building on our pioneering demonstration of nuclear structure effects, we  
present a more precise quantitative extraction",,,

"quadrupole and octupole deformation" -->
"quadrupole and octupole deformation parameters"

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