STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Shengli Huang <shengli.huang AT stonybrook.edu>]

Dear Subhash,

    Thanks for the comments. I implement them. The update draft can be found with same link.

The total words are less than 250 now.

Thanks!

Shengli

On Fri, Apr 21, 2023 at 10:56 AM subhash via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Shengli,

Nice abstract. I have a few additional suggestions for your
consideration:

Please double check the word limit to keep it within ~ 350 words.

How about re-phrasing it,

l#3-6:  "The small system collision scan at RHIC, including both
symmetric and asymmetric systems (.....), provide a better understanding
of the emergence of collectivity and its evolution with system size."

l#70-10: "We analyze a large sample of minimum-bias and
central-triggered O+O collisions at sNN = 200 GeV and inclusive γ+Au
processes at sNN = 40 GeV by triggering ultra-peripheral events in Au+Au
collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV during the year 2021 and 2019,
respectively."

l#15: "Our analysis of 16O+16O collisions .... " --> vn measurements in
16O+16O collisions ..

l#20: In addition, v_n measurements in γ+Au processes play an important
role in understanding the origin of collectivity and lay the foundation
....

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2023-04-21 01:47 PM, zhchen via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Hi Shengli,
>
> Nice abstract. I sign off with one minor suggestion
> - line 12: "as a function" -> "as functions"
>
> Cheers,
> Zhenyu
>
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