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Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
 
submitted by Baoshan Xi ( xibaoshan AT sinap.ac.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/New-Insights-Spin-Alignment-Heavy-Ion-Collisions-Measurements-phi-om

Comment:
Second round of comments:

Change voice in line 10-12 to have the consistent tone throughout the  
abstract:
"In this contribution, new measurement... will be presented." --> "In this  
contribution, we present new measurement...."

This line is not clear at all:
"role of the strong field in nuclear structure and the evolution of nuclear  
matter."
What do you mean by "role of strong field in nuclear structure" ? Do you mean 
 
"in nuclear matter" ?
Also, you say "the evolution of nuclear matter", what evolution are we  
talking about. Evolution with what, energy?


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